Unwanted love

• Artist: Doomed Sex
• Description: A rap/poem, whatever you want to call it, wrote it when I was down, it won a contest worldwide and got published, just want to know what Gaia thinks.
• Date: 11/17/2008
• Tags: loved lovingless

Cause I'm so sick of makin the same wrong,
Saying I'll stay strong,
Saying I'll move on,
I'm ready to put my words to work,
Cause I'm sick of all the hurt,
Ending up with a face full of dirt,
Knuckles bloody red,
With a mind so cold,
And a heart so dead,
But then with a soul so bold,
I'm not going to give in no more,
I'm not going to fold,
I'm closing the door,
So much anger,
It's just a whole load,
Tired of the restless nights,
And the painful games,
I just wanted to be in sight,
And for you to remember my name,
Carve it on your arm,
Or tat it on your heart,
I'd tat it on mine,
But its broken apart,
You were the glue,
And you were the tape,
How did something so true,
Just have to break,

Comments

[slipknot_is_not_newby]

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* Astictic - 11/28/2008
* Ooh, you can sing it to the tune of Rihanna's Take a Bow.

I LOVED it! Grammer, spelling, everything was fine! But most of all it's so.... Awesome! Creative! True!
WTF

[Rebecca Roads]

wow...
that is amazing.
is it a life experence?
(srry i cant spell worth crap)

[rose-of-sheeta]

Oh! i love it thats how i feel to.. crying If you make it into a song and be a singer ill buy your CDS!

[C Cayne da Beast Mayne]

dude....you should actually put that to a beat...Its beast.

I know how you feel too....

[Astictic]

Ooh, you can sing it to the tune of Rihanna's Take a Bow.

I LOVED it! Grammer, spelling, everything was fine! But most of all it's so.... Awesome! Creative! True!

[xXxKiss_Me_GoodbyexXx]

wow i liked it... and i hate rap! kewl! biggrin

[G i i NGER BREAD]

This is so good! I love how you got all the emotions down and everything .. it's really good :]