Unwanted love

• Artist: Doomed Sex
• Description: A rap/poem, whatever you want to call it, wrote it when I was down, it won a contest worldwide and got published, just want to know what Gaia thinks.
• Date: 11/17/2008
• Tags: loved lovingless

Cause I'm so sick of makin the same wrong,
Saying I'll stay strong,
Saying I'll move on,
I'm ready to put my words to work,
Cause I'm sick of all the hurt,
Ending up with a face full of dirt,
Knuckles bloody red,
With a mind so cold,
And a heart so dead,
But then with a soul so bold,
I'm not going to give in no more,
I'm not going to fold,
I'm closing the door,
So much anger,
It's just a whole load,
Tired of the restless nights,
And the painful games,
I just wanted to be in sight,
And for you to remember my name,
Carve it on your arm,
Or tat it on your heart,
I'd tat it on mine,
But its broken apart,
You were the glue,
And you were the tape,
How did something so true,
Just have to break,

Comments

[Account Not In Progress]

I liked it, but wow really? it won worldwide? thats awesome! When I read it, I put it into my own meaning u kno wat i mean? Not on love, but on life. ^^

[westranisnm1]

geuss what eclipse and dude ought to shove it cuz this is really good i mean if i could right a poem like that id have chicks head over frickin heels lol good job it ought to be worldwide lol1000/10 awesome

[Mars Phobos]

Goooood. biggrin

[Dark Fox Sentaro]

damn powerful never heard something so deep. but it is awesome

[Heartless_WolfSpirit]

it seems so sad to me but yet i think its realy good!

[candyobsessed]

very good

10/10