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I am the darkness
In which you seek
The painful bliss
That makes you weak
The muffled whispers
In your dreams
The blood stained covers
With jagged seams
You call to me
When the moon is high
Expecting to see
The night from the sky
The moon turns red
You hear the cry
It's death they said
So say goodbye
- Title: Death
- Artist: QQRainbow
- Description: Short Poem I wrote to back a character from one of my stories. I hope you like it.
- Date: 07/15/2008
- Tags: death blood moon darkness
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Comments (7 Comments)
- mystery123456789 - 02/25/2009
- great 5 out of 5
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- Grusius - 07/16/2008
- good 5/5
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- QQRainbow - 07/15/2008
- meanie
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- Toastbusters - 07/15/2008
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A poem written with an ABAB rhyme scheme! WHOA!
And it's about Death? With no nuances, subtlety, or anything to expand upon? With no punctuation, room for extrapolation, or inference?
Jeez, man! You really rocked the boat with this one! - Report As Spam
- luckylee218 - 07/15/2008
- I like it. Though some how I couldn't help but think that it's a lot like this one song I heard a while ago...
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- _daddys_charmed_girl_ - 07/15/2008
- thats awesome i like it
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- QQRainbow - 07/15/2008
- Tankies ^_^
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