Ebony Sea

• Artist: YinYamiYugiLover
• Description: Just a poem I wrote one day for Creative Writing auditions. It helped me get in. :3
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: ebonyseapoem

I’ll shiver purple and silver
I’ll tremble crimson and gold
My heart will swim in ebony
From memories of secrets untold
Touch me, and I’ll sigh copper
Hit me, and I’ll scream blue
And my heart will swim in ebony
From memories of secrets ’bout you
Make me laugh; I’ll show you a rainbow
Make me cry; I’ll show the sea
My heart will swim in dark waters
When my mind crosses this memory
I’ll shiver purple and silver
I’ll tremble crimson and gold
My heart will swim in a sea of ebony
From memories of secrets untold

Comments

[Deadlylight6]

make it big enough to actually read....3/5

[CaptainMeriderp]

Beautifully written, you chose the right words to get what you were trying to say.

Well done!

[Teh Toasted E m o]

That's beautiful [:
Very well written.
5.

[The Rockbell Girl]

Very impressive. I like it.

[YinYamiYugiLover]

Thank you all for commenting and rating! heart

[Sharing Heartbeats]

I liked the first two lines, but then it got a bit cutesy.

[Lillysachomige]

Beautiful. You have some amazing talent. I wish I could write like that. Keep on writing!