Pain

• Artist: kat_luvs_u
• Description: An older poem I wrote during some free time in class. Comments please! ((Good and Bad))
• Date: 07/16/2008
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I hate the way they look at me.
I hate the way I feel.
But they don't know the pain I see;
the bitter things I think.
It's just and act, the way I am,
So now they'll never know:
the darkest secrets that I keep,
the anguish I endure.
The future bleak that I foretell
for them does not end well.
They will fall and they will die.
Of that I am quite sure.
Topple down and go away
until I'm all alone.
Then no more stares and
no more pain
until it all
begins again.

Comments

[xxxsexykrisxxx]

love the poem i feel ya

[pollier]

ahw.i lurve it^^

[Bullied By the world]

very good i can relate to this.

[crunch221]

thats really good!!!

[Winry_Rockbell799]

I liked this. It's a really honest look at feelings and it also made me sad, especially the last part about the pain beginning again. i like the way this flows together and so i give you 5 stars smile

[The Umbrella Society]

hmm. very depressing. i love it. good work biggrin