5 finger discount

• Artist: Dragonok
• Description: a poem i wrote about my girlfriend,
  5 finger discounts=stealing for those of you who dont know(yeah i know some of you dont)
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: love stealing

hey you,
yeah you,
baby i got a five finger discount on your heart
you know i want it you know i have it now
you were standing outside that day we met
you were wearing those blue jeans, and that black shirt that looks so good on you
i got introduced to you and from that day on
i knew i had to have you
you were always on the move
always searching to be the one
why didnt you look behind you and see i was the one
then you stopped running and i bumped into you
you turned around and knew i was that one
yeah i finaly got that five finger discount on your heart today yeah baby
i got that five finger discount today
thats what i've been waiting on for so long
that type of discount all along

Comments

[Tibix]

split the sixth line up and take out the and, and you have a good poem oh i got a 5 finger discount on this spot

[ekitten614]

wow, that's really sweet. the only thing i would change is to split the sixth line into two lines and maybe the fourteenth. and of course capitalization and spelling is always good, but hey. ;D