It happened again....

• Artist: LunaSunrise
• Description: This is about the heartache that I've felt for years.
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: girlsadhappenedcat

It happened again........
Another boy broke my heart.......
He left me for a thin girl........
Why am I alone?
My heart is burning........
It hurts from this long painful yurning.....
Wanting to be close to a guy......
Yet I am always left to cry...........
It happened again........
I am left alone.........
No one has my back.........
No one is home.........
If I hear his voice yak.........
All I can think is that.......
I would rather be a cat.......
It happened again.....

Comments

[demon strait outta_hell]

I share the feeling. But it could use a little tweaking... but, in a few simple words- most guys are pigs.

[redneck jesus]

i really like this! i can relate to this but im a boy so its a girl who dumped me =) wait i mean =(

[Ryan Russell]

I know way too many girls that can relate to you on this one. ) :
Like Magikhawk said, I would drop all the periods and I'd spend more time working on the poem's detail. I think the whole cat line was forced in there as an (unfortunate) attempt at rhyming. Still, the poem is worth some work. ( :

[Kateryna of Kyiv]

Stop going out with shallow people

problem solved

[magikhawk]

uh.. im a critic on this stuff. i think you want to loose the extra dots. along with spell checking. because im pretty sure its yearning. not yurning. and instead of just whining try to put some description in it, it could be soooo much better with a little work

[Lenasa]

Sad, but its not that bad.