Check Mate

• Artist: ST4RCASM
• Description: This is a poem I made after reading a short story about a game of chess. I know it's short, but I hope you enjoy it^_^
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: chess checkmate queen advance

Lined up in rows of two,
One by one, make your move.
Back and fourth, a game of chance,
Taking into, onto, a d v a n c e!
S w i f t m o v e, clear and clean,
One falls down, surrender,
There goes the queen.
Next move we battle out,
Check Mate.

Comments

[Asylums Dark Presence]

The change very awkward. This is good 4/5

[ultrauiolet]

nice. but go easy on the changing of fonts. keep in simple:]

[Diana wynne pham]

likeit.

[ST4RCASM]

Please be kind, and present feed back, and please, don't bother me about my style or the poem itself. Thank you~

~Rix