nothing is left

• Artist: billybobjoepicklefreddy
• Description: i can't spell and i know this is crap but i would love coments on what i could improve
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: fallen

there is nothing left
no spirit to light the way through the dark
no life to find help

there is no one left
no family to help me cope
no friends to make me smile

there is no love to give
no heart to give to another
no compation to share

i have fallen into an empty cage and there is no door to release me and now i have fallen to the bottom where i will slowly die but no one will notest

Comments

[Tweego]

Rlly? Ariana lay off. SHE DID A GREAT JOB!

[Ariana DeLiese]

Um,..well...obviously you need to correct your spelling and grammar, and the last stanza needs to be reformatted to be in the line with the rest of the poem. and the entire poem has to have some sort of lyrical rythmn for it flow properly.