* I'm sorry little girl *

• Artist: Miss Kakirimushi
• Description: please forgive.
  
• Date: 07/17/2008
• Tags: love sorrow forgivenest

I'm sorry little girl i let u down i put a frown upon your face which really let me down.I'm sorry little girl just go ahead a look around and u have always found a way to forgive and forget. I'm little girl i didn't mean to let u down.Now hears a little something that should really change your mind please can you ever forgive me.


heart heart heart I'm sorry little sister can u ever forgive me.

Comments

[xXRoseBerryXx]

Eh... it was ok i guess but
next time make it look
like a "poem" instead
of a paraghraph you use in
English class. If it were
well written, i would have givin
it a 4/5 but sorry, u lost the
points :

[Unfaded_Roses]

I LUv it is awesome!

[Pirate Gigue]

Are you insane? This is a violation of the English language! If you want to submit writing, I can accept anything except for using i instead of I, or u instead of you! It's not that hard! Please, this writing has great potential but loses a ton of credibility because it's in Internet speak instead of English. Please, please, please--it's not so hard to hit shift and check your spelling on the computer.

[Hello Terror-Mornings]

I see you're pouring your heart out here, but don't you also have an apology paragraph to your mother?