Invisible pain......

• Artist: Madoka_Mai_Chan
• Description: This poem was inspired by the feeling of being invisible, everwhere you go nobody even takes a second glance, a closer look.....
• Date: 07/17/2008
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In
the dark
I sit hiding from
The hatred of the world
Hiding from the evils I am
Bound to... the stones that I
Bruise from, the knives that i am
Stabbed with, crying tears of red, I
Sit alone. Even in plain sight I am not
Noticed, when I stand by you, you can't
See? never bother to crack the code to solve
the mystery. If you only took a closer look my spirit
can be free, an end to this misery.

Comments

[Puddila]

It is lovely i love it code to solve in a nice part to it
but aranea right the lines are written its hard to read but its good

[Madoka_Mai_Chan]

thank u but um i dont realy know how to do that this is my second entry in any arena so if anybody could tell me how i would make it better

[Aranea Lilium]

It's very lovely but you should consider redoing the way the lines are written. It's a little hard to read because some of it is chunked together in the wrong places, but other than that this is a very good piece. =]