Corner of Shame

• Artist: GlitterSpritzer
• Description: I wrote this poem about 3 years ago; at the time I had a major crush on a guy but this poem can pretty much be referring to just about anything.
  (Btw, nothing written here is meant to be perverted (I'm talking about the 2nd line... just so no one misunderstands).)
• Date: 07/17/2008
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My mind is wandering and my heart is yearning
I feel in every part of my body a sensational burning.
I don’t know what to do; I don’t know what to feel
If he’s not the one for me I don’t know if this fragile heart of mine will ever heal.
Oh no, he’s coming towards me, what should I do?
I shrink back into the corner while he still has no clue.
This is my fate, I’m cursed with for life
This shyness and fear to speak cuts into me like a sharp, heated knife.
I am no one, a pathetic fool with no name
For I do nothing but sit here... alone... in my corner of shame.

Comments

[fluffysgirl7413]

nice detailing with the words (font, color, etc).
interesting rhyme scheme. its pretty good.

[The God Bot 4000]

This is decent.
It definitely isn't my style of interest, but it's still good.
so five.

[Enigma Knight]

I love how you incorporated font size changes, bold letters, and font color changes to convey your thoughts. Very nice indeed. 5 stars!