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A red rose withered within my heart tonight.
A dead poet's dream only filled with fright.
A dream not forgotten, but will soon need to be.
For my heart is now broken and I will forever bleed.
- Title: Bleed
- Artist: Mr Botty
- Description: Short & Sweet.
- Date: 07/17/2008
- Tags: bleed
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Rainbow cat FACE - 07/29/2009
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reminds me of aiden's nightmare anatomy xD
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- selene_queen_of_a_lost - 07/17/2008
- my heart is always bleeding as is yours we are tortured souls i can relate
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- ekitten614 - 07/17/2008
- Short and very poetic. I like it! Especially the first and last lines.
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- The God Bot 4000 - 07/17/2008
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This didn't really impress me, but I can't say it's bad.
3/5
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- ribbonforluv - 07/17/2008
- ^_^ i like it <3 it rhymes.... and i love the dark theme read mine read mine biggrin its called inside inside
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- small kid_21054 - 07/17/2008
- creepy but good
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- devin92 - 07/17/2008
- nice so true
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