Black and white.

• Artist: Kechero-TheForsakenRose
• Description: Just a poem I wrote. Its okey. This poem is baced off of horror movies and and actual thing. Her brother haunts her and then kills her.
  
  
• Date: 07/17/2008
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Black and white.
One night I dreamed of flying a kite.
High up into the sky, higher and higher it did fly.
My dream was black and white...

Then I was running from someone in black.
As fast as I could through my dream.
But I never got far, and I can't scream.
I run and run, and never look back...

My brothers in a room, its all white.
He doesn't speak, he only stares.
I ask whats happened, but noone cares.
A white jaket's around him tight...

Suddenly ink spills from my mouth, thick and black.
I choke and scream, but noone turns. My tounge swells
and the ink burns. My brother stares at my and I stare back...

I wake upand my room is like my dream, black and white.
Then another colour is there, red.
I'm suddenly in pain and sweat fills my head. My brother is there,
he does not talk, only stares. His demonic stare was the last thing I saw,
on my last night.
It was black and white...

Comments

[Kechero-TheForsakenRose]

You are kind. Can't say i agree with you though.

[cute emo panda girl119]

wow i luv it 5 stars

[Kechero-TheForsakenRose]

She wakes up to find its real, then her brother kills her.
I baced it off a twisted horror movie and the old Halloween movies with Michael Mayers.

[Angeladr7]

i like it. it really potrays how dreams are sooo bizarre. love how you went back in forth between the two colors black and white. the dreams sounded more like a nightmare though! lol

[selene_queen_of_a_lost]

deep nice i love how u kept referring to ur brother i have a similar poem

[Kechero-TheForsakenRose]

Haha! Thanx, but I still think it sucks.^ ^

[keth Sanders]

bit dark, but in this case it's a good thing, I liked it but remember that "noone" is not one word but two separate ones "no one".