Violin

• Artist: Menardi Grace
• Description: The stanza are written in Haiku form (5/7/5 syllables). This was written around 2001-2002 for class in high school.
  
  EDIT: I edited the 3rd line, 1st Stanza and 2nd line, 3rd Stanza! This should make it a proper haiku now.
• Date: 07/18/2008
• Tags: violin haiku

Ah, gentle music,
How I long to hear your psalm
My treasure of light

I’ll play for my heart
Through the harsh practice I learn
Your music steals me

The violin tone
Oh! Such sweet sound to my ears
I play for me now

Comments

[Menardi Grace]

There's extra syllables? O my, I guess I need to re-edit this sometime.

I played violin since I was in 4th grade. That was roughly 14 years ago.

[hobbsrocks]

That's pretty awesome! but, in the first stanza, the last line has one extra syllable, and in the 2nd line in the last stanza has one less syllable... other than that, i think its pretty awesome! 4/5

[icygirl357]

lovely. 5 starz! please vote back on my poem. btw, how long have you played? (i've played for like 7 years n i luv it)

[Crystalinemoon]

Wow short and powerful ^-^