betraid angel

• Artist: Angel Princess Lilliana
• Description: this is a poem i wrote while a history lesson.
  
  I felt very sad because my boyfriend broke up with me
  so i wrote this to et my feelings out
  
  i hope it please you ... and please do not cry because i am fine now^^
• Date: 07/19/2008
• Tags: angelbrokenheartlove

I was in heaven
innocent and pure
then i flow down to earth
and meet you

I felt in love with you
and giving you my holy glow
but that was not satisfying
you also want my wings

I gave them to you
without hesitation
and you rip out every feather
with your violant touching

but this didn´t matter for me
i was blinded by love
i didn´t want to see
your true self

i served you my pure angelheart
on a silver plate
but you broke it into 1000 pieces
and through it into te shadows

now i am all alone
with neither heart nor wings
arounded from other sinned creatures
betraied by whom i loved the most

nevertheless i wait
for Prince Carming to safe me
i wait until eternity
in vain

Comments

[CheshireDaydreams]

I like it lots, would've given you a five, but it really needs spellchecked. The rules of the arena suggested that, so you'd get a 4.5, but it's only in whole stars, so I'm giving you a 4. Good luck!

[fizznomore]

Spell-check would have helped. smile

[Kobey24]

i would give that in a lil box with a ring to propose to someone to be dere fiance

[Mistress Revan]

aaaww, its so good!

[xRosieRevengex]

that was beautiful hun!
love it
:]
xoox.