Machine

• Artist: Xx-Mystra-xX
• Description: one of my many dark poetry ..
  is interested come and read..
  comments are appreciated
  ENJOY
• Date: 07/20/2008
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I hear the click as the gears turn in my mind
my thoughts grind though
twisted under the pressure of time
the results distorted images...
my life to blame
as i gradually become a machine
my heart slowly stops until it no longer beats
and my blood hardens frozen in lifeless veins...
i am emotionless in my torment
envying all that are free of my hell
my mind caging me internally
the contradictions that bare me ever growing...
my soul slammed against the walls
beaten and raped of its will
slowly dieing in its decaying cage
never to be free...
my skin becomes like leather
hardened and senseless
untouchable by your hatred
for there is no feeling in your swings
i am but a mass of nothing
and will release myself from your burden
sliding this blade across my wrist
freeing my tattered soul
childless you become...

Comments

[King Max - Wild Thing]

I absolutely love this, it is very well written. (:

[This Accident]

I like it a whole lot! biggrin 5/5

[Macabre_Words]

Good. I like at the end you said: "Childless you become" after you or whoever this is about kills themselves. Neither am I a big fan of depressing poetry but yours just catches my eye.

[Liquid Robot]

this is... chilly. Although I'm not a big fan of 'depressing' poetry, the whole 'my life is just terrible' - without a REASON. Anyway, it sent a chill down my spine, so well done.

[rosemidnight17]

very dark and depressing indeed. but some of the best poetry in the world came from this kind of stuff. i love it. im watching you and 5 stars.