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This anger burns inside me like fire.
I must let it go, but I can't.
I need help getting my life together,
But I'm too afraid to ask.
So while I sit and wait for this anger to erupt inside me,
I will tell you this.
I hope you never forget how you ruined my life,
How you killed me inside.
This will forever haunt you
Until you pass on,
And you will forever live in darkness
Never to see the light again.
- by Im Like Heroin |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/20/2008 |
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- Title: Anger
- Artist: Im Like Heroin
- Description: I wrote a lot about my feelings, which were mostly anger and depression. That's how I vent.
- Date: 07/20/2008
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Zero Ember - 07/24/2009
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it's a good poem, but it could use more emotion, maybe some different word play...but overall i think it hit it's mark
4/5
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- Rozoko - 07/20/2008
- The structure is kinda off and it's really unbalanced in the flow of it... I will give it a 2
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- xxx-reaper - 07/20/2008
- Feels like it could have gone on longer. This is the second poem I've seen of yours and while in here i have only seen 2... wierd
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- DJ Hotplumpnicoleprimaj - 07/20/2008
- hey why don't u space out your writing and whatever it is brilliant!!!!! nice done nice done!!!
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- hanvel123 - 07/20/2008
- hm..cool
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- emo_on_a_sugar_rush - 07/20/2008
- Awesome poem! I love it.
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