surfing

• Artist: thedidkid95
• Description: i wrote this for a dumb class assignment my teacher gave me and A+ and then when my parents read it they thought i stole it from the internet but i didnt hope u guys like it
• Date: 07/21/2008
• Tags: surfing

There’s a sunny summer’s sun
As I awake I can tell its going to be a good day
I check the report
Good to fair
That’s all I need
I strap my board to the car roof
I head to my spot
The spot that I only take my friends to
The spot that’s ours and only ours
As I arrive I see my friends already there
Waves crash, looks like they’re
Double overhead
These are my waves
With my board in arms I’m off
Already in over my head, I paddle out
As I wait, I see it come
I turn my board and ready for it
Finally, I feel the suck pull me, I paddle hard
The wave is big
I’m in the middle, I stand and quickly balance out
I slow myself down for the thrill of my life
The tube
I’m in there deep now
Hands ripple the water
I’m surrounded now, water on all sides
Finally the wave is breaking
I burst through that water wall
Blinded by beauty
I’m happy as ever
That one wave just made my day

Comments

[Dis_Ish_Bunny_X3]

I give it a 5 I love surfing but I never have time to get out on the ocean. crying

[XDIm _A_DorkXD]

it has alot of thought and it is very poetic :3 i agree u deserved that A+ and i would have thought u stole it to its really that GOOD lol

[thedidkid95]

ok wat u need 2 do is reread it and think of the poetic devices that wats its supposed 2 show

[rosemidnight17]

I won't lie. As I read it, I was thinking, "This isn't very poetic." lol but the last 8 lines are what made it really good. I was self satisfied when I was done reading it. much enjoyed. 5 stars. biggrin