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alone in these messy place,
looking for nothing else..
guided by da' lightings' flash,
holding my breathe till it last....
how can i......
how can i say goodbye...
you alone, my one and only love
u set me a part..
gave me a new heart filled with your compassion of your great love..
help me with these.. i want to know you..
seeing myself with nothing worth...
goodbye my old life.. goodbye.. bye..
- Title: HOW CAN I
- Artist: plo2x
- Description: i wrote these poem to express what i felt these moment in time.. i will really appreciate your comments and feedbacks..
- Date: 07/22/2008
- Tags: aloneemotional
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Comments (2 Comments)
- lilli1220 - 12/17/2008
- um its ok... but some parts don't really make sense. maybe make it all flowery and cheesy by adding more description, maybe add a setting cause u can describe settings alot
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- plo2x - 08/01/2008
- haaay..
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