Smile for Me

• Artist: hottieisnaughty
• Description: I wrote this a while ago, last year around the same month I believe, but this is one of my favorites. You can almost picture it in your mind I think. I've always wanted to draw a picture in the back round as well but I've never gotten to it. Wish me luck!
• Date: 07/22/2008
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i looked at her face
and i almost cried
her face was was filled,
with the saddest eyes
her hair hung in a raggedy style,
her arms limp at her side.
soot covered her face
scratches along her legs
i took her in
cleaned her face
wiped away the anger and hate
she looked at me
i looked at her
and then i said,
"smile for me"
she looked away
sadness filled her eyes
and i hugged her,
let her cry
when her hiccups had settled down
she looked at me
then said to me with the smallest of smiles,
"now you smile for me"

Comments

[oX-silent-rose-Xo]

what a beautiful poem. yes i can picture it in my mind, though unfortunately i don't know how to describe it in words. its lovely! a definite 5/5

[mkjhfd]

i luved it
its such a beautiful poem..!
and yes, i can picture it in my mind:
she, crying hugging him, with a small but honest smile...
^^