The last night

• Artist: darklover66
• Description: i wrote this when i was really bored in first period, I dont think its that good but its one of the first poems ive ever writen. its about a girl and her having a dream about a guy that has died. i hope you like it =]
• Date: 07/24/2008
• Tags: saddreamlovepain

curling up in his arms
knowing tonight will be our last

refusing to let him see the tears
i hold my head up high
and lock it up inside

together him and i
hold each other one last time
before the morning light
when we both know what will happen

i curl up in his arms telling him the truth
telling him how much i care
whispering those three words

i see the light coming
and close my eyes to hide
feeling him pull me close

his warmth is gone
i know im alone
as i open my eyes to wake up from this dream

Comments

[tampico-chan]

oh, btw, you might get more views if you put a comma in between every tag. ^_^

[tampico-chan]

how sad... it reminds me of my Daddy. i miss him, and sometimes i can see him when i dream. then i wake up crying... its a very nice poem, touching. ^.^..

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