Friend

• Artist: xxKirriexx
• Description: Thank you Reigha for being there when I needed you the most.
• Date: 07/27/2008
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Thank you for everything
you do for me.
I am glad that you are the
one that I can call my friend.
Talks, sleepovers, and many
other things that we do.
I am glad that I have
a friend like you.
Thank you for being
with me and for letting
me call you my Friend.

Comments

[Biochemical Accident]

It's short sweet and to the point, though I feel like you didn't break the lines correctly. Example "I'm glad that you are the" pause "One that I can call my friend" Doesn't sound right to me. Also - I think that some words that you had in there were not needed - they seemed to take away from the picture a poem should create. You did a good job, keep improving. I give you a two star rating.

[maddog012]

i think it is very nice that you appreciate your friends like that.