unthoughtful love

• Artist: -extravagant-waffle-
• Description: its about 1 time when i was supposed 2 have the love of mi dreams and fotunatly i got her...so here goes
• Date: 07/30/2008
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as my friend and i speak of eachother, i ask her...
do u like me?....she said no....

i asked her...do u think im handsome?...
she said no...

i bagan 2 break out into dewdrops in the corners of my eyes...
as they grew she looked as if she were to cry too...

i told her..i think your beutiful... and i couldent stant not to look at you...

so..tell me this...would u cry if i walked away....
she said no....

i began to walk away as she grasped my arm with the force of care...

she told me...

i dont like you i love you..

i dont think your handsome i think your unbelievably cute...

and u even dare to think that i dont care...well if u walked away i
wouldent cry...i would die...

Comments

[fallen_lilith]

aww i...its awesome love it 5/5 i wish i could give it a 10

[Acid Memoirs]

I Luv it! <3 <3 Its rlly nice ;D

[Avery_Lockwell]

Yes! It does have spelling errors here and there. But other then that it is very good, I have heard this poem before but in different words. But putting it in your own words it is very sweet.

[E d i b l e F l o w e r]

Your poem is filled with all sorts of spelling and gramatical errors. So many thats its impossible to take any of it seriously.

[xdream_chaosx]

i love it