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Dark Betrayal
Around, all around, the dark memories gather.
My dread grows as the dagger of your words falls against my heart.
It crushes me, and darkly my
blood drips
to the fallen despairing leaves.
In a frenzy I call your name
while the Reaper takes me.
Now alone, my cascade of tears falls upon uncaring eyes.
This is because of you
Around, all around, the dark memories gather.
My dread grows as the dagger of your words falls against my heart.
It crushes me, and darkly my
blood drips
to the fallen despairing leaves.
In a frenzy I call your name
while the Reaper takes me.
Now alone, my cascade of tears falls upon uncaring eyes.
This is because of you
- Title: Dark Betrayal
- Artist: Ashi2846
- Description: i enjoy these dark poems but never tried a love poem or anything about love and this poem truly describes a dark betrayl
- Date: 08/02/2008
- Tags: gothpoemlovedark
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Rosedragon15 - 05/26/2009
- I loved your poem and dark is good
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- xoxkenny93xox - 03/09/2009
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your poem is amazing
"My dread grows as the dagger of your words falls against my heart."
i thought that line was beautiful. i just don't understand why it repeats....
but i'm a simpleton so it doesn't really matter ^^
good job 5/5
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- Ashi2846 - 12/14/2008
- i might be but will never say
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- the jokers apprentice - 12/13/2008
- good words very gothic r u a goth?
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