an angel?

• Artist: gghhjja
• Description: mostly true
• Date: 08/03/2008
• Tags: angel

snow falls as i walk in the woods,
noone is sight,
i slip over a root,
i look up and see a girl,
i get up and ask he who she is,
she just stares,
then she holds out her hand,
i get up and my hand greets hers,
a flash of light and shes gone,
is she real,
can i trust my self?

Comments

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

Argh! "though" I hate typos. >.<

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

It lacks a lot of things. You did say you kind of messed up, thoug, so you can understand my low score. 1.25/5

[Karak15]

it's interestting. Seems like some is missing though...

[gghhjja]

i kinda messed up