Dying Life

• Artist: Oldies Fan13
• Description: I wrote this when I was was thinking about how goes through a pattern of life then death, winter then spring, how some animals, will sacrifice there life's for there babies and to continue the cycle of life that is until a dominant species like man kind kills them off. And please COMMENT I would LOVE to hear your opinions.
• Date: 08/16/2008
• Tags: dyinglife

ever lasting darkness
covers a never dying world
only to continue the never ending chain of life
and death

when light finally breaks through the darkness
and brightens a room of sadness
it's only fate is to be smothered every time

but then an uncommon event breaks the chain
now death seems untouchable by these events
but causing more death to spread to others

Comments

[tear goddess]

Not bad at all. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work. 5/5

[Peeco]

Thats very beautiful, graceful and deep. You have quite a talent. 5