Untitled.

• Artist: x_iSnuggleDork
• Description: This is an untitled poem I wrote one summers' eve. I was kinda bored. So... just tell me if you like it. Thanks.
• Date: 08/28/2008
• Tags: kiss love untitled

Lay close to me on the ground,
your lips touch mine,
and my heart pounds,
you hold me close,
I hold you tight,
because I know you'll be here tonight.
you keep me warm,
i keep you cool,
baby our love is like a storm
i can feel you breathing harder
as i lay my head on your chest
and then i feel you stop just like you were about to rest,
i look at you and see you dead,
and i just couldn't get it through my head.
as i lay there and weep,
i kiss your hand one last time
and i say aloud our love will go on even though your gone...

Comments

[Nicholai Makali Russo]

I believe it has song potential.
You should look into writing lyrics.

[AH-Closed]

Wow, if that's what you can do while your bored, I wanna see what you can do when you are actually trying. It's excellent! Happy, then sad, but ending with confidence. It's an amazing piece of work.

[Sexgasum]

I liked this poem :3 Kinda sad but shows true love ^^