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I met you this past year,
you were a friend of my peer.
At first sight I knew it was to good to be true,
That I would always want to be with you.
You were funny and kind,
and I wanted you to be mine.
I wanted you to stay,
but I knew it wouldn't happen, anyway.
I'll always be there for you,
as long as you want me to.
I know I'll have to go,
but if you love me, I still don't know.
I waited on that one, love ridden day,
where you would say:
"Be my valentine,
oh, won't you be mine?"
But those words never came,
so now I know, you diddn't feel the same.
But I'll wait for that faithful day,
when you finally say:
"I'll be there for you,
as long as you want me to.
I know I'll have to go,
But, I've always loved you, and now you know."
- by infinite_personalities101 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/09/2008 |
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- Title: Valentine Lost
- Artist: infinite_personalities101
- Description: I wrote this in 8th for this guy I liked and still do, every line in this poem is true, I still haven't told him how I feel, but I'm afraid to ruin the friendship, I see him everyday at lunch....but anyway that's not important. Please rate and comment! I need a little advice for my suckish and amatuer writting.......
- Date: 09/09/2008
- Tags: valentine lost
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Comments (6 Comments)
- xXDark_Vampire_LoverXx - 12/26/2008
- Very good. ^^
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- lilly1122 - 09/10/2008
- good job! :]
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- Lithumn - 09/09/2008
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i liked it alot
...kinda simple, but still
really good - Report As Spam
- Helpline - 09/09/2008
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Wow that is all I have to say you did very good.
5/5 - Report As Spam
- PR1NC3SS T1G3R - 09/09/2008
- Ah, I like it. smile
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- errordeletedaccout - 09/09/2008
- what grade are you in now?
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