Empty

• Artist: Daughter of Elves
• Description: Umm, yeah, this one I just dug out of the dusty notebooks. I think it's pretty good, but then again, I'm not really fond of any of my works. This makes seven poems, two shortstories, and two chapters of my first novel up here, so if you like this check out some of my others. Feedback would be totally awesome.
• Date: 09/11/2008
• Tags: empty

Empty room,
flooded in shadows,
and a girl,
breathing shallow.

Empty soul,
drenched in pain,
and a mind,
tortured again and again.

Eyes glisten,
pain leading the way,
and a girl,
cries herself to one last sleep.

Empty room,
empty soul,
to remain empty,
forever more.

Comments

[vampiress_of_the_dark]

you write really good poems

[Renpaichii]

This could be your best poem! Great job ^.^

[blame the laser rain]

pretty great. I like it alot