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Silver rays shower down
Into the whispering brook,
Casting the reflection of the celestial moon.
Fish swim languidly
In the warm crystal waters,
Illuminated by the quiet light.
Soft green blades sway
In the smooth winds.
They wait eagerly for the morning dew.
Few sounds can be heard
In this glimpse of nature:
The brook softly tricks down it's path.
The towering oaks whistle in the smooth winds.
All begin to fade
As the clouds retake their sky.
The quiet brook,
The swaying grass,
The whistling trees.
All fade from sight.
- by Haseo Hyuuga |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/11/2008 |
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- Title: Glimpse of Nature
- Artist: Haseo Hyuuga
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Description:
Came up with it in art class instead of listening to the teacher. Dispite that fact, I still made an A in that class :p
It is edited from the original. - Date: 09/11/2008
- Tags: glimpse nature
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Comments (7 Comments)
- xXLukaXAkatsukiXx - 09/28/2008
- It is a inspiring piece.I am young, and I long for the day when I can easily use descriptive language.
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- iBrightScales - 09/27/2008
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It's beautiful.
Languidly, I love that word.
Not many people use it <3 - Report As Spam
- Haseo Hyuuga - 09/27/2008
- thanks for the comments everyone,
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- SilvertongueSagittarius - 09/15/2008
- as I akways say, beauty is often crafted in the wake of listlessness. i like it. im a sucker for nature observational poetry.4/5
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- Akeioni - 09/13/2008
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Wow.
It's not short...not really.
Its amazing.
I find it extremly hard to write non-rhyming poems that sound good, and that was very good.
And actually, because it doesnt rhyme, i think its fine for it not to have the same about of lines in each stanza.
But who wrote a rulebook for poetry?
Great job. =] - Report As Spam
- ikoriin - 09/12/2008
- Not bad. :') Normally a poem's verses should each have the same amount of lines, right? That's okay though. Nice job depicting the scene!~
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