A pieve of me, needs you here

• Artist: Raniel150590_05
• Description: well, this is a piece of me,
  a part of my heart
  and the feel you take from here
• Date: 09/18/2008
• Tags: today myself heart feel blood

Well... sweatdrop
Today I get
a new way to take
a stronger heart pirate

a new way to die gonk
a new way to lie stare
i lie myself xp
i know I'm dying today crying

sure you can understand wink
i let you be on my way cry
i wanna go where whee
your heart is living today dramallama

i wanna get you gonk
i wanna feel again crying
i need to feel you rolleyes
need to feel you again biggrin

between my arms heart
within my heart lol
in a place that cry
i can feel your warm redface

so cold i can mrgreen
feel my hands talk2hand
i need yourself here sweatdrop
i need your heart with me heart
xp xp xp xp xp

Comments

[maydaymouse]

It's good, but would be a lot better without all the emotes. It's still a good poem, so I'll give you a 4/5.

[Sky Wolf Morte23]

u must be heartbroken or somethin

[riku-sayoko]

Oh okay?

[cutepie_cutepie16]

maybe u should remove some emotes

[Sir Lirin]

That was so cute! I've never seen a poem use smilies before!!!!!

[Feliica]

LOL XD

[i_luv_boys93]

why was there a llama?