bury me

• Artist: Ms Make Me Smile
• Description: its a poem i wrote at lunch in school when i was in a bad mood cause we had a science test but anyway its just about death and when someone dies.i got the idea from the fact that im not bothered by death and that people are always forgotten at some point so whats the real point in having funerals and all of that stuff.im not saying that i believe that thats just where the idea comes ,please comment and add to your favourites
• Date: 09/26/2008
• Tags: burydeath

when i die
i will not be sad
i will not be weak
i wont even be there

bury me inside the coffin
stop my heart
stop my head
stop it all

begin the light
begin the later
begin the unknown
begin the end

stop the crying
stop the mourners
stop the priest
stop them all

begin the moving
begin the forgetting
begin the history
begin the end

Comments

[MadBlasta]

Interesting work...I like.

[Hacked By Blank]

Never mind her. I thought it was good smile
but only because it was rather morbid, this si how i think a poem should be like full of morbidity like this one biggrin

[Mecca Against Reality]

I didn't like this AT ALL. Sorry if it sounds rude or anything, but it's a bit annoying with all the sentences beginning with the same thing, and it made little sence. I understand where you're coming from, but it sucked. I wanna rate this a 0 but I guess a 1 will suffice.