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MOVE ON
By: Dendie Powao
what's past is past
there's no spell to cast
so you must accept that fact
elude all your negative acts
forgetting takes time
at a flip of a dime
impossible
but overcoming the past is possible
if you believe all the pain will not last
life will be a blast
because no one lives in perfection
everybody has problems to make correction
move on
go on
nobody will forever live in the dark
but the past will leave a mark
to ignore the dark past
learn from what you already cast
then realize
that life does not need to be criticize
- by xxasian_ladyxx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/27/2008 |
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- Title: MOVE ON
- Artist: xxasian_ladyxx
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Description:
wrote it during class
tehehe
- Date: 09/27/2008
- Tags: dendiepowao
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Sparkly Tits - 03/28/2009
- ohh i like it! read mines?
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- iwrestledaslothonce - 12/19/2008
- Ish nice :3
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- xiolinchidori - 09/28/2008
- its nice veru nice
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- KoolBeansBabee - 09/27/2008
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Wow, very good. And the fact that you wrote it in class is
very good also. haha Oh and you did mispell 'last' as pointed out in the comment below. Well you seem to be pretty talented. So keep up the good work, because you have something going for you. 5-stars :] - Report As Spam
- Divine Shadows - 09/27/2008
- Spelled "last" wrong mate. Other than that it's a great poem, It has strong voice to it, good flow, and a deep symbolism.
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