my dear friend

• Artist: SenNataku
• Description: this was to my boyfriend and he moved to pennsylvania and im in minnesota
• Date: 10/03/2008
• Tags: dear friend

my dear best friend i loved you a lot
but one day you said to me,
we might not ever get to see each other at all,
i act brave and mighty all over the outside,
but in my heart i cried
did you not see at all, did you not feel at all
the saddness and sorrow i felt when you said goodbye

Comments

[ESHA_221]

i love this poem
nd now i noe exactly what my friends r thinkin cause im moving in december. its awesome keep it up

[Rahka Ablem]

Very heartfelt, but I feel the capitalization and spelling (u is a pet peeve of mine) detract from it, 4 stars. (Sorry E.E. Cummings)

[Auzzygurl17]

that's such a sweet poem.