I am a sailor

• Artist: XxXVanessa-ChanXxX
• Description: this is a pome that i wrote whin i was in sixth grade.it was so good that it made the teacher cry.
• Date: 10/05/2008
• Tags: sailor

I am a sailor
I am a sailor that wants to go home,
I get sick alot but iam strong,
I know my dad i dead and my mom is ill but i will not fall,
i see the captain giving orders.
i see people dieing but that doesent stop me
i havent been on land on over 3 years
i cry and cry for my mom and that she would be there when i go home,
i am a sailor that wants to go home...and soon i will be home

Comments

[Kier Dishonored]

i ohnestly doubt a poem like this would make anyone cry.... other than that i didnt like it.

[xX-ChosenAngel-Xx]

Wow that is sad, p.s. FIRST COMMENT!!!!