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My tears, my saviour, my release
Was the only thing keeping me alive
Without them; I am lost,
Struggling to survive
These emotions cannot be expressed
These words can't tell my story
These expressions cannot be fulfilled
Leading me from my saving glory
Please sweep me away,
From this world of mine
I'm stuck inside,
The shards of time
These tears won't pour,
Brimming in my eyes
Can't smile the same,
With all these lies
When the masks start falling
again and again
People won't stop bothering me
Until they win
When it all is through,
It still remains..
That no matter what
These tears won't fall
- by Mecca Against Reality |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/06/2008 |
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- Title: These Tears Won't Fall
- Artist: Mecca Against Reality
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Description:
I've been going through this poem for two days and I still don't think the flow is all that great (but I'm posting it anyway :P). It is about conflicting emotions, and a release from it all. It was how I handled things on a day to day basis, until it was ripped from me.
I hope you like it and please comment! - Date: 10/06/2008
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Princess of Nobody - 11/08/2008
- Your poems are really good. It's filled with a lot of emotions. Good work~ :3
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- gokushin540 - 11/03/2008
- good is shroter could be shorter
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- the_ashen_child - 10/06/2008
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.........i see.....hmmmm.......i can see you filled it with a lot of emotion
Good Work!!!^^ - Report As Spam
- CassieLuv7 - 10/06/2008
- this is really cool, keep writing! biggrin
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- Swiftgurl802 - 10/06/2008
- Flow or not, this is a great piece of work!! Your poem doesn't have to rhyme or anything, so don't worry. I enjoyed reading this poem, and i hope you submit something else soon!! xd
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