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woundering around never awake
i hear and see but can not wake
despirate for air but can not breath
drowning in sorrow but no one can see
wishing for wake
on the ground
sees everything but nothings around
running but no ones there
running in my mind
going insane
mad and sad
wishing for wake
wanting company waiting for sound
never dead never
going black then white
hears all thats around
mocking me yelling and whispering
going black can't see
can't hear scared to death
wishing for death wishing for wake
- by the lovely loser |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/12/2008 |
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- Title: wishing for wake
- Artist: the lovely loser
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Description:
first poetry i have wrote in forever not my best
but i love it anyway - Date: 10/12/2008
- Tags: wishing wake
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Comments (6 Comments)
- sandman_guildmule - 12/02/2008
- pretty cool!!
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- Hatori Amos - 11/28/2008
- Please fix your spelling, punctuation, and capitalization errors.
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- i-Penguin_Girl - 11/27/2008
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That was.. really deep and scary! I loved it!!
5 star's! I don't know how you said you haven't been riteing much after that. =3 - Report As Spam
- ghouIie - 10/13/2008
- i liked it ^^
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- Hicronimous - 10/12/2008
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that..... that was deep man...................... 5 stars!!! I almost CRIED!!!!!!!
btw, I FOUND you, sqaull!!! lol - Report As Spam
- opalee - 10/12/2008
- I like the into best.
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