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LYRICS
Embrace me and heal my pain
I doubt it 'cause you brought the rain.
You lied to me with curse and blame
You promised me and now you're a shame.
I hate you for what you've done
And now all the memories are gone;
You betrayed the one who cares for you
Right now she's bleeding and forgetting you.
These teardrops will mend my heart
And no one again can tear it apart;
I told you to take good care of it
But all you did is hurt and break it.
I hate you for who you are
Your words, your promises
Your silence, Your love
And all of the above.
- by snow_nightmare |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/18/2008 |
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- Title: Lyrics
- Artist: snow_nightmare
- Description: +`This was supposed to be a lyrics but apparently I don't know how to play any instrument and that's why it is entitled as is. I made this because I wanted to help the little sister of my "ex-best friend". I never really thought that I actually made something beautiful for someone I hated so much. So, I hope you guys like it. :]
- Date: 10/18/2008
- Tags: lyrics
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Comments (7 Comments)
- snow_nightmare - 10/18/2008
- +`Mr. MCjackdaripper - Thank you for the advice. Appreciated. :]
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- snow_nightmare - 10/18/2008
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+`thank you.
I'm glad you like it. :] - Report As Spam
- CottenCandyGal101 - 10/18/2008
- 5/5
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- SilvertongueSagittarius - 10/18/2008
- too simple of rhymes and a rough flow. try throwing in a more powerful message with a ridiculously over the top metaphor as well.(i.e. " you tossed my heart in the garbage disposal/ the day you declined my marriage proposal" wink that just came to me but u get what i mean. neway, it needs work.2/5
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- red1496 - 10/18/2008
- omg im nearly 2 tears it brings bak good nd bad memories wow im putting this in my faves nd 5/5!!!!!
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- Teayo - 10/18/2008
- beautiful words nice format 5/5
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- kaoru-pengu - 10/18/2008
- good one..i can really feel how u feel
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