---rose

• Artist: The Seventh Lost
• Description: well I am not quite sure why I even wrote this in the first place anymore, but, guess I want opinions lol
  and if someone complains that it has no flow. . .
  that's cuz it doesn't have much of one, it's the way my mind works, so I wrote it like that on purpose lol but feel free to say whatever you want, suppose I want to hear it.
• Date: 10/19/2008
• Tags: rose rose

First.

In the darkness it was bought

filled with cowardice and loathing it was sold

the price I pay, to reach through the cold

the grave, as a hand the new beauty will reach

everything that is hate
that was my soul

the rose,
it was the deal

my soul for the beauty,
that which will not be kept

the thorns bite at the hand that in it is held
it desires to return, back to darkness

yet, it must be held,
lost once, would be lost forever,
held once,
tis only a taste

my soul for the beauty, it can't be a waste.

this rose, it is me,
it is my face

Comments

[Nymunan]

Very well written. I enjoyed it immensly biggrin
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[sweetstone]

i luv that renadi.. it's so awesome.. better than i could ever do!

[Lady Forbidden]

i like it hun