Goodbye

• Artist: Lex2442
• Description: i dont think this is a very good poem because i didnt really take my time.
  if you give a bad comment i dont mind then it helps me know how i can fix it.
• Date: 10/19/2008
• Tags: goodbye

One day you will clearly see.
That you were, the one for me.
I cant believe you walked away.
Before i ever got to say, Goodbye
Right before you asked me out.
You heard your friends scream and shout.
Then you went to see what it was about.
Then i saw you try to get out.
Then that was the end.
Now my heart will never mend.
I sent some letters to our class.
But then their hearts broke like glass.

Comments

[AFIrocksxx]

it was really good, i usually dont take much time on my poems. Thank you for commenting on mine too. Good Job!!!

[Lex2442]

ty for liking it ^^

[l Princess Sugar l]

I like it, its not bad, it confused me a bit but it made more sense when i reread it

[sezuko]

i like it i have the perfect icon for this poem. the icon shows a glass heart and above it it says be careful its fragile. even if you didnt take your time i love it. i didnt take my time writing this comment see? you did good.