the dark

• Artist: Angry gothicbabe
• Description: this is a love poem about a girl and her vampire boyfriend from the girls point of view
• Date: 10/28/2008
• Tags: myvampireboy

i see dark clouds comming to get me
i see death comming around me
yes i am dead .my vamprie boyfreind must of set me free me free from my life of shame now i can walk with him and my famly does not judge him and
hate him twisted evil that goodness for him as we can be togther as one not as two lovers living away from each other living in fear now my family must live in fear of me coming to get them and make them a vampire

Comments

[JhinDanG_XD]

a great story !! nice !

[Sapphire_Honuka_73]

I think it would make a great story actually. you can easily get a climax/pot from that poem smile I like it but it needs to be longer if you ask me.Good job anyway!!!!!!!!!!

[Angry gothicbabe]

this was my first poem i have ever made it was some teething problems but to me it is ok hate or like its up to u what u think about it

[X-Deviling-X]

You have lots of room for improvement