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Tears streaked my face,
Fell to the floor.
I watched him silently,
Walk out the front door.
I didn't know why,
I couldn't believe...
What that guy had,
Just done to me.
He said life was great,
"Everything's good."
Then he left me...
I felt like a fool.
It was already to late,
Damage was done.
During our last battle,
He had won.
I gave him my heart!
Nothing in return!
Our flame has run out,
And there's nothing to burn.
Now I am here,
Crying alone.
But deep down I'm glad,
I'm now on my own.
- by Immortal Cynicism |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/30/2008 |
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- Title: The LOVE You STOLE
- Artist: Immortal Cynicism
- Description: Basially my English class had to write poetry then present it to the class. FYI I hate, Hate HATE! presentation. My theme was the love that can be lost or stolen from you. This is the poem I wrote. XD
- Date: 10/30/2008
- Tags: love stole goldenstate
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Immortal Cynicism - 11/03/2008
- Thanks guys for the comments. XD And I"ll read your poems Overlord. ^^ I"m not really a poet but I can attempt to write more if people like them.
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- UNKNOW dude ii - 10/31/2008
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wow dis is awesome =D i luv it,
if u have tym u shood check out sum of my poems sumtym =) - Report As Spam
- the seductive voices - 10/31/2008
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aww your really good!
this sorta makes up of how I feel right now. - Report As Spam
- rich milk chocolate - 10/30/2008
- this poem that you wrote is deep and i really like it. i hope i can read more of your poems. u r a very good poet
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- xXCuddlie_Yet_ViciousXx - 10/30/2008
- i really love this poem...it's very emotional and i can relate to the message. the colours emphasize the words well.
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