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Flowers fade in the cold of fall
do you keep the pedals?
She brakes at your cold stare
will you keep the pieces?
Flowers sprout in the dawn of spring
do you keep the bud?
Her story has just begun
Will you stop at chapter one?
Flowers open on the eve of summer
do you keep the blossoms?
I wake in the realization of my love for you
will you return it and keep me by your side,
forever?
- by Black Gipsie |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/02/2008 |
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- Title: Flowers
- Artist: Black Gipsie
- Description: Just a liitle poem I came up with one night. I had just finished reading Breaking Dawn by Stephanie Meyer and was in that romance kind of mood. Thsi poem does not aply to me. Its more of for the story I'm writing...
- Date: 11/02/2008
- Tags: flowers
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Comments (5 Comments)
- fading-flower1256 - 12/23/2008
- good job!!
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- -chino- x3x - 11/05/2008
- nice poem...nice comparing also...good one bro
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- Black Gipsie - 11/05/2008
- thankies!! I thought of this at like 10:30 at night on a school night. I had to run down stairs to get my notebook so I wouldn't forget it. x.X Anyways I glad that you like it! Cookies for everyone with a good review!
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- the_ashen_child - 11/03/2008
- very nice. the format is good and the content is wonderful. good work.
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- mini_kitty14 - 11/02/2008
- i love that whole series and i love your poem it does remind me of the twilight books. Great job!!!!!
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