death in a gun.

• Artist: Meepa_chan_is_a_MW
• Description: disclamier:the picture on the bottom is not mine, i didnt draw it i just saw it as an inspiration.
  
  this is my first ryhming poem..sorry if it sux >.<. this is my poem, so no one has permission to steal it or tell me its not mine. this is just something i came up with cause i was bored..PLEASE LEAVE A COMMENT!!!!!! i dont car if its a nice comment or not, i just wanna here ur guys oponion...yes my grammer is bad but im working on it.
  ~love soubi kun.
  p.s. thank you.
• Date: 11/08/2008
• Tags: death sorrow emotional rhyming poem

I have no were to run, for you have a gun. i have no were to hide, for your

pride might devour me whole. your lie, may leave me to die. You say "lets

make this game last." but i have to go fast. I see the light, but all you can see

is the word fight. Your fist leaves blood, and my tears make a flood. You smirk

and say, "see you in hell," i smile know i am going to die here, for this i can

tell.

Comments

[pleasent_dreams_my_dear]

pretty good!

[xX_black emo girl15_Xx]

it goood for ur first rhyme but work on it its cool i guess 3/5

[Lelitoth]

That's pretty good for your first rhyming poem.