Vampire Love by Gatita Nati

• Artist: xXDark Blossom TearsxX
• Description: Vampires actually fall in love but u better be careful while were on the roll
• Date: 11/09/2008
• Tags: vampirelovebygatitanati

You are the best thing that has ever happened to me
but ur also the ache right inside of me
ur the the reason i get up in the morning
but ur also the reason i dont want to sleep at night
ur are my beloved and i am urs
plz dont get distracted while were on the roll
thats the worse thing that could happen when we are alone
u might be surprised , we might be interrupted
dont worry i dont bite only when the moon is out at night

blaugh

Comments

[Yan Qi]

Ehh... good. 3/5

Positive: I like the last line.

Negative: I's not very original, using chat speak in poetry is a bit tacky, the rhythm is practically non-existance.

[renesmee carle cullen]

good

[lustsforblood]

i love it
very cute