Broken Hearted Eye

• Artist: minny_pinky2
• Description: well i wrote it a week later when i broke up with my boyfriend because he would come to my house all the time cryin and literally beggin me to come back to him so i decided to write him a letter of how things were and what went wrong and somehow it ended a poem. and im not embarassed to sy that he actually did beat me up but he got the point and now knew why i broke up with him . BUt now things are okay were decidin on getting back together
  he actaually took anger amnagement classes!
• Date: 11/16/2008
• Tags: broken hearted

I remember i loved you
I remember you said
youll always be the one
dont ever forget
I remember you slapped me
I remember i cried
I remember the pain
I felt inside
I remember your face
like it was yesterday
and the feelin that i felt
of dumping you right away
I rememeber the fear
as you saw me in the eyes
I remember i trembled
beneath inside
I remember the fire
I saw in your eyes
I rememeber the first time
I started to cry
I rememebr the secrets
you promised not to tell
but what hurt me most
is when you said
go to hell
but as much as it hurts me to say
we are better of this way
I felt betrayed and even abused
I had no idea i had fallen in love
with soemone like you
and as much as it hurts
to not be at your side
I wont make
the same mistake twice
Because id rather
have a broken heart
than a busted eye

Comments

[minny_pinky222]

i want to say thanks everybody for the kind words.........and yes this is me but in a different account!............thanks again!

[musicbyme]

well im glad 4 u guys.if he make a mistake again dont forgive instead just be friend but if he love u as much as he say then i no he'll do anything he could 4 u.i giv that a 4 rating

[dark_angel6680]

hey tubms up on ur poetry it rly has feeling in it

[ExiledShinobii]

D= nice poem ^_^ maybe i can write a poem to you and well like idk sare poemz thought idk xDlolz but keep up the great work ^_^

[Insane Jester646]

Hey I do too, it isn't so bad...
No i didn't hit people... i just get angry a lot...
anyways good poem, and it is understandable

[Slinkenhofer]

wow....thats pretty depressing....very nice poem tho