frozen zone

• Artist: Queen_Plum
• Description: ................freezing to death enough said i apoligize for spelling mistakes please comment i enjoy reading them vary much
• Date: 11/20/2008
• Tags: frozen zone

I sit alone in this frozen zone
My heart freezing with each sad tone
Sullen and pained in the place i lay
Praying death is not delayed
Tears i shed frozen in place
Death is slow as my heart and mind race
Trying there best to keep my death at bay
As i slowley freeze this wintery day
My skin turned blue as my bodys warmth is stolen
My ears burn
My eyes sting
Know i cant feel a thing
My heart has froze
Its frantic beating torn apart
The cold hand of death taking its part
With one last breath my mind gose blank
Yanked away my life had sank
Forever in my cold resting place
I have died alone in this frozen zone

Comments

[Queen_Plum]

i went with the ears burning becouse when you get relly cold you kinda feel like is burning from the cold

[Quzo]

Great stuff! One thing though, this is the frozen so maybe you could change the bit about the ears burning to something else? You could use the word chill (or chilling), refrigarate, imbobalize or 'out of action' to name a few.