The City of Heaven

• Artist: High-Fly17
• Description: I wrought this peom and all my friends seem to like it so i thought i might put it in the contest
• Date: 11/26/2008
• Tags: city heaven light hell

you stop as you walk
along the road most taken
but you still take the road most taken
for that we must talk

for you walk to the gates of hell
but you should walk the path to heaven
the great and glorious city of heaven
and that I do tell

as you walk closer to the light
the greater your shadow will become
as you come
foward in the night

for you walk to the gates of hell
but you should walk the path to heaven
the great and glorious city of heaven
and that I do tell

as your shadow gets greater
the temptation of sin will grow
you will need to fight it to and frow
as your faith becomes greater

for you walk a path of light
and you walk the path to heaven
the great and glorious city of heaven
and know I say go in the night

Comments

[kiba_akira]

awesome peom but check out mine is called way to the dawn

[Da machine gun]

The more faith you have the more temptation you get is not necessarily true

[Jenna894]

i loves it, i think id get sucked into hell though =P 5

[nintendo24ds]

yay,...you get a cookie

[Shurtugal_Hinata_Hana]

Very good I like it very much

[emolemon18]

wow! Every time I read it I get more out of it.
This is one DANG good peom!