Tick, Tock

• Artist: Scruffy_dog02
• Description: This was done recently with time on my mind. . .how it never stops, never slows, never quickens. . . no matter who you are, no matter how rich, how poor you may be. . . eventually the ticking starts to slow. . . until it stops
• Date: 11/28/2008
• Tags: tick tock clock life death

Tick,
Tock,
Goes this clock.

Never slowing,
Always paced.

Never faster,
There's no haste.

The hands, they spin,
Round and round.

As always have been,
Forever bound.

Until. . .

Your soul, it tires,
Becoming ill.

Your life expires,
Silence fills.

Until,
Tick,
Tock.

This clock,
It stops.

Comments

[Faerie]

Nice smile
I love the rhythm of this piece....Its balanced ^ ^

[Starlight_Miss]

I really like it! It has that great rhythm to it. 4/5! Please rate back.

[Scruffy_dog02]

Or it died (that swhat I was trying to portray . . . life? death? that sorta thing?) ^^;

[abbye5]

if the ticking stops that means its broken XD